Listen free for 30 days

  • Final Core: Volume 1

  • By: Razzmatazz
  • Narrated by: Adam Verner
  • Length: 14 hrs and 14 mins
  • 3.9 out of 5 stars (12 ratings)

One credit a month, good for any title to download and keep.
Unlimited listening to the Plus Catalogue - thousands of select Audible Originals, podcasts and audiobooks.
No commitment - cancel anytime.
£7.99/month after 30 days. Renews automatically. See here for eligibility.
Final Core: Volume 1 cover art

Final Core: Volume 1

By: Razzmatazz
Narrated by: Adam Verner
Try for £0.00

£7.99/month after 30 days. Renews automatically. See here for eligibility.

Buy Now for £36.69

Buy Now for £36.69

Pay using card ending in
By completing your purchase, you agree to Audible's Conditions of Use and authorise Audible to charge your designated card or any other card on file. Please see our Privacy Notice, Cookies Notice and Interest-based Ads Notice.

Summary

I died and was accidentally reborn as an [angelic monstrosity].

So now I'm building a holy dungeon-tower that is tall enough to reach the gods...so that I can complain about it!

But the humans think that I am trying to destroy the world.

This is the first volume of the Final Core, a dungeon core base-building LitRPG series.

©2022 D.M. Rhodes (P)2023 Podium Audio

What listeners say about Final Core: Volume 1

Average customer ratings
Overall
  • 4 out of 5 stars
  • 5 Stars
    5
  • 4 Stars
    3
  • 3 Stars
    2
  • 2 Stars
    2
  • 1 Stars
    0
Performance
  • 4.5 out of 5 stars
  • 5 Stars
    7
  • 4 Stars
    3
  • 3 Stars
    1
  • 2 Stars
    0
  • 1 Stars
    0
Story
  • 3.5 out of 5 stars
  • 5 Stars
    5
  • 4 Stars
    1
  • 3 Stars
    2
  • 2 Stars
    3
  • 1 Stars
    0

Reviews - Please select the tabs below to change the source of reviews.

Sort by:
Filter by:
  • Overall
    2 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    4 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    2 out of 5 stars

The Author Summary Lies.

The Author tries to give you one story with its summary.

Here is a more accurate summary:

I died on a battlefield, with a sword deep in my chest.

I was reincarnated as a female bird.
It was peacefull, making my nest and taking care of my eggs, when I heard two voices.

Seems like I wasn't properly reincarnated.

I was supposed to be a bird, in this reincarnation, but the goddess I prayed to wanted me to be something else.

I was reincarnated again.
This time into an Angelic Dungeon.

Now I am building up to the sky to ask them to make me into a bird again, so that I can take care of my eggs.

Sort by:
Filter by:
  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    4 out of 5 stars
Profile Image for Marcus
  • Marcus
  • 01-02-23

calm story

an intresting and fun story, with fun characters and lots of info on lore

2 people found this helpful

  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
Profile Image for Lloyd
  • Lloyd
  • 27-01-23

a very unusual book

I can honestly say I have never listened to a book like this.
not my first lit RPG, but I've never had an lesson in mythology that was so entertaining and educational at the same time.

2 people found this helpful

  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
Profile Image for O-C
  • O-C
  • 18-03-23

The Cover is Misleading, This Book is Underrated

Don't let the cover mislead you about this book, or let the low average rating discourage you! I nearly turned away because of the anime-esque vibes of the cover, which usually heralds a shallow fanfic-like harem story (from what I've seen), but that couldn't be farther from the truth. This book is a wonderful and leisurely exploration of one e̶̦̋͑n̴͈̼͊̚t̷̡̎̐ḯ̷̻̦̑t̵̡̹͒͛y̵͘͜ trying to find it's place in life. Hell, the thing on the cover isn't even accurate to the story itself, as the main character is much closer to a winged slenderman than a beautiful angelic woman.

Anyway, now that I have your attention, I'd like to say that this book is a breath of fresh air when it comes to the Dungeon Core genre. I don't understand how it could possibly have a 4.2 on Audible, as it's clearly a 4.8+. The book is well thought out, plausibly realistic, and lacks the usual mocking/carefree tone that often ruins the sense of tension in such books. The pacing is slow and soothing, and time is well spent exploring the world and characters. Each of the characters have admirable depth and motivation, and while we don't get to know any character intimately, even the ones that die two minutes after their introduction have hints of deeper drives and character. I am fully on board with the objectives of the main character, and quite like the magic system and upgrade paths available to the MC.

Additionally, as several other reviews have stated, this book has many lore notes and worldbuilding tangents, which dive into both the place of dungeons in the story and the real world mythology behind many creatures presented in the story.

I would also like to praise the "child" phase of our main character. As in some reincarnation stories, our main character does not start out with all of their mental faculties at full capacity. However, unlike several book series I have read (notably the Divine Dungeon series and the Salvos series), this segment is not cringing comedy or painful ignorance, rather it is a interesting (and somehow cute) phase of the MC’s development which makes total sense within the world, as well as acting as a vital building block for later character growth. I found it not only tolerable, but actually an enjoyable part of the story.

As an example of this, when first reincarnated, our MC remembers its previous name "Isaiah". It then goes around pointing at various objects and landmarks and confidently proclaiming them to be "Isaiah" only to be disappointed, before eventually seeing its own reflection and finding "Isaiah". Then, as expected of a being that was most recently a bird, our MC climbs up into a tree and wonders if "Isaiah" will be safe under the water. Stupid, yes, but I found it cute, so.

The only flaw I have with this book (and a minor flaw at that) is Razzmatazz's depiction of religion. As you can clearly tell from the cover and summary, this book revolves around an angelic being ruling over a dungeon, bringing faith to the people who climb its tower and granting mercy to all those who seek shelter within its walls. To a noticeable degree, the main character believes in the gods and the faith it preaches, but importantly, it is NOT a zealot of its faith.

This is in part due to the discord between the Abrahamic depiction of an all-benevolent, all-powerful, and all-knowing supreme being that our main character seems to be preaching for, and the Hellenistic depiction of flawed, petty, and totally human gods that the polytheistic religion of this world seems to worship. These ideas clash several times in the background of the story, and while they don't ruin anything, they undermine the motivations of several characters.

While this isn’t ideal, the main issue I have is with the implicit understanding that Razzmatazz seems to hold regarding religion. In short, "religion is a scam". This is said explicitly at a few points, and implicitly through the actions of several leading protagonists. Our main character puts on a "front" of divinity and benevolence, and intentionally seeks to paint an image of itself that will benefit its own goals by pretending to be more divine than it actually is (which is kinda weird for an angel, but, whatever). Throughout the story, Razzmatazz also fails to put any major emphasis on the value of faith itself, nor the sense of community and purpose such belief systems can instill in worshipers. In all cases where characters feel the bone-deep awe associated with divine revelation, these characters are explicitly misunderstanding the world around them and deluding themselves into a sense of false importance.

For reference on my perspective, I am a devout atheist, have never found religion to be attractive in any way, and have severe moral issues with the Abrahamic idea of worshiping a personified being. I do not like religion in any of its forms, and believe most organized religions to be thoroughly corrupt and obsolete. However, I am mature enough to see the manifold benefits that those who DO believe can find in their faith, and how noble and comforting it can feel to trust the will of the Divine. Thus, I take offense to the scamming of people who truly believe in their gods, and of the deliberate manipulation of one's actions to appear more divine and righteous. Their feelings are real to them, and honestly that is all that matters.

If you are a true believer of any faith, you will likely find these elements of the story to be significantly more abrasive than I have. Despite that, I would still recommend this book, for the quality of the story is more than enough to make up for this. And for those who do not claim any faith, really do check this out. It will be well worth the credit.

TL:DR; Cover and rating is misleading, there are no anime girls here, the book is a calm and slow paced exploration of the world, there is lots of worldbuilding and interesting lore, the author nails the "child" phase and makes it actually enjoyable, and the magic is good. Fully recommended for all readers, but a warning for any religious ones: the book has an unflattering opinion of how religion works from the divine side, which annoyed even an atheist like me a few times.

1 person found this helpful

  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
Profile Image for Richard
  • Richard
  • 16-01-23

Good

If you like dungeon stories, you would like this
It has a unique twist g

1 person found this helpful

  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
Profile Image for David E.
  • David E.
  • 14-01-23

Masterfully Done!

The characters are great and the way the voice actor brings out all the different personalities is engaging. It is not super crunchy, which I like and us more character driven. 10/10 would recommend it.

1 person found this helpful

  • Overall
    2 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    2 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    2 out of 5 stars
Profile Image for James Lopez
  • James Lopez
  • 13-03-23

Extremely Slow

I had to quit after 6 Hours. Repetitive and monotone, I really want my money back!

  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
Profile Image for Ryan
  • Ryan
  • 10-03-23

Love the Occult Knowledge

It’s an absolutely solid dungeon core book. Man reincarnates and ends up a holy dungeon core. As the story progresses, there are author excerpts describing different historic sources for the mythical creatures. Very interesting tidbits, made very pleasurable to hear because of the solid narrator