Fab …. But sad reasons for the three stars

The three stars not more is because it is a great twisty story. But repetitive sentences to describe tingling skin etc get boring .

Plus, I don’t know how to write this …. We are all supposed to consider how we speak , consider racist language more than ever before. So, as a white person. “ white girl wasted “ and “ woke white boys “ ( several times in first chapter of another of the authors books ) white girl wasted and various derogatory terms towards white people is frankly offensive and on the other foot would not be accepted .

Crass speech “ yeah I’ll hit dat again “ seems to be the acceptable way to speak time and time again with only varying ways of wording it .

Seems to be a need to be demeaning about each and every character which is white more so than when any other character is described.

So , yo girrrrrllllfriennndddd . Educate dat so-called fly mouth ‘fore ya’ll start sounding like yo don’t know shiiiiit”. Oh. Sorry, was I sounding rude and derogatory then? Was I type casting then? Oh do forgive me I was attempting for an authentic character. No, ya’ll just trying to have a fun play I am sure , sadly though . This author, I have started one more to see if it was one book and in one chapter the next is the same . I’ll finish it , if I can get through the racism without having to protest somewhere … oh hold on. No, I am not always needing to have my own voice heard . I just wish to listen to a well written story. With only a smidge of vanilla racism . If we go to white bashing even more , I’ll stop reading and be in touch with author or publisher as if it gets worse …..

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