Hmmmm

Not sure what to make of this book... I did roll my eyes a few times at some of Noah’s comments. Personally I would of done the Aquarius thing and cut motherf**ker out... And my Dad for trying to control me.

Narrators are great, I love teddy Hamilton but not for this character.

Overall..It's tolerable whilst waiting for my credits to come in.

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Part of 3 volumes

Story not bad but I don't like it when the full story isn't completed and it isn't clear at time of picking that you have to purchase 2 other volumes...bad form!

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Not sure

So the story is incomplete and, considering how short it is, I think the author could have made a longer book instead of 3 tiny ones. I also found Olivia utterly irritating but Noah was funny. Overall it’s a good story but only worthy as part of the membership, I wouldn’t buy it.
Both narrators performance were amazing.

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Loved the cliffhanger

I actually Really enjoyed this! I just wish they realised how they felt and then the cliffhanger! Come on!

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Its ok

This was Ok to listen to. Its very short if you were to purchase it with tokens but as a freebie in the plus catalogue its ok. I'm generally not too over critical about books like these, after all they are just a little bit of light romantic fiction but I gotta say this one takes it a little far with the inheritance clause thing. So these 2 well educated men, who built a multi million dollar empire and raised their kids to be their successor and who apparently love there children .... is forcing their kids to marry each other...... that's a bit of a stretch for me, but ok, I figure maybe something in the story will explain why they did this.... but then the kicker ( and this isn't really a spoiler as its in the blurb) she also has to get pregnant within 90 days???? hmmm this isn't the middle ages... most woman are on birth control that could seriously affect their ability to get pregnant that fast and lets not get in to the whole issue of what if they have fertility issues....??? Are their dads saying that if they cant get pregnant within 90 days... they loose the company they love and worked so hard for. ?? but even if we want to pretend in this world everybody can magically get pregnant when they want and this couple who are being forced into a quick marriage wouldn't want to maybe take a year to , you know, get used to a married life before pregnancy hormones and a screaming baby add even more stress to their lives... lets just say none of that is and issue. There is one other very crucial thing that seems to have been forgotten. If she is having a baby... how is she supposed run the company? I'm not saying there are no woman that do this, of course there is. but the plot is that they have to have the kid within 90 days to inherit so this young couple have to get Married, have a kid and Run a multi Million Dollar company that is struggling.... ??? so she has to have this kid with a man she doesn't love and then what ....leave it to the nanny to raise while she goes back to work.... she will have to pick between raising her baby and seeing those precious first moments or go save the the struggling company she loves and leave the baby with the nanny.... but yes of course the fathers only want what was best for the kids ( rolls eyes). Sadly this is a plot issue I really struggled to get over. I'm going to listen to the next part of this story and see where it goes and if I feel the resolution is ok then i'll come edit this review to reflect it but for now this is barely 3 stars. There are parts of this that is quite entertaining... just the baby thing spoilt it for me.

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Cliffhanger

It was a good storyline, but I hate Cliffhangers and wouldn’t have bothered if I had realised. So from that perspective it was disappointing.

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Great story with cliffhanger ending

Noah and Olivia have known each other most of their lives and although they have different personalities they're drawn to one another.
Trying to save their fathers business draws them into an unusual relationship.
I will definitely be listening to the next two instalments of the story but I agree with one reviewer that this could have been put into one audio book

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Omg !!

What a cliffhanger omg I’m so glad I’ve already got book 2 and don’t have to wait , wow wow wow .

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Cliffhanger Alert!!!

I hate cliffhangers. If the next story was not available for me to listen straight away, I wouldn't evan to give it a star. I am so disappointed with the way it ended.

Update.
I have finished reading books two and three, and I am pleased with the future development of the story and the way it ended. Despite all of that, I would prefer the whole story was in one book. Cliffhanger series is not for me. Give me a series with individual book as a stand alone and I am happy. Even more so, if they intertwine so I can catch up with the characters in the previous books.
If you don't mind cliffhanger, the three stories combined are actually good.

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Easy listen after a hard days work, just what the doctor prescribed. Seriously though, the story is pretty simple, but enough to take you away from real life issues.

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