A Series Developing Substance and Momentum

The second of Matthew Harffy’s excellent Bernicia Chronicles and may there be plenty more to come. Having proved himself as a warrior it might seem as if he’s in for a restful time but with kingdoms at stake and old enemies still lurking Beobrand is put to the test in almost every way imaginable. With his rise through the ranks comes greater riches, power and responsibility. As with the series opener this is another fast moving historical fiction with plenty of action. The Mead Halls are brimming with intrigue and there is a climactic encounter with an old enemy . . . though if Beobrand thinks that is the end of his difficulties in that regard he is sorely mistaken.

The superstitious nature of the times gets a good outing and Beobrand has to deal with some rather noisy neighbours. The church comes more to the fore with the author’s license being used to the full on some real historical characters.

In all it’s a fine continuation of the series and if like me you really liked the first one it seems it’s good news because there is plenty more to come!

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will not be reading the next in

3/4s of the book could have been written by Barbara Cartland or any similar bodice ripper scribbler!
Beobrand has turned into a 'Knight in shining armour' stereotype with flowery language and various damsels in distress.
The battle scenes are almost ok but lack any depth.
Disappointed!

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Great listen!

Longtime friends and followers of mine might know that I endorsed Harffy’s debut novel, The Serpent Sword. That was a self-published affair which garnered enough interest and sales that Matthew was taken on by a major publisher, Aria, and this is the resultant sequel.

The tale is quite straightforward with love, action and beautifully written prose aplenty and, combined with a really good narrator, makes for a great listen. It gets especially nasty (in a good way!) about two-thirds in and things really start to come together there.

I felt a little as if this was a bridge between the first book and the next, setting things up for what’s to come for the rest of the series. That’s no bad thing and there is enough to keep your interest up throughout although I did miss a bit of humour. The events are dark and gritty and the characters know it – but it would have been nice to have a bit of childish banter between the men just to lighten things. As it is, the word I kept thinking of as I listened was “earnest”. The dialogue is earnest, the characters are earnest and the prose is too. I was wishing someone would fart or stand in a dog turd but sadly there’s no slapstick silliness here!

This series has been compared to Bernard Cornwell’s Uhtred stories (by me, actually, in that previously-mentioned endorsement!) but, although settings and time period are similar, the writing is completely different in The Cross and the Curse. Fans of one author will enjoy the other I’m sure, as both are absolutely brilliant.

Steven A. McKay, author of the Forest Lord series

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boring and frustrating

I really wanted to like this book, since I enjoy the setting and wish there was more fiction set around this time, but I just found it incredibly exhausting. The characters are flat, the women seem to exist only to be raped and murdered, and Beobrand lacks any shred of humour, kindness, or tenderness that would make him endearing. I'm not sure why I should care about this man who does nothing but murder and hate people. I won't be contributing this series.

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2nd and last Harffy book

historical link interesting but story predictable and draw out....
each of the key points painfully told.

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Formulaic, stereotype dark ages troubled hero

Had the format been print you skim read the the hero's inner conflict with some arcain Norse gods. It is just so tedious so fast forwarding and having to pause to see if it back on storyline. Too many writer are now padding their storyline with lengthy copy of the hero's neurotic/psychotic thoughts.
When you consider the work in its totality the storyline can too often seem like a string vest rather than a properly tailored suit..

If I had a genuine interst in Dark ages spirits/gods demons I woul seek some tome dedicated to explaining the nuances and foible's of such entities. I listened to have the audion and rechon the I fast forwarded 30%.

I have read and listened to a number of the author's books and noticed there was an increasing inclusion of Norse gods/spirit interwoven with the storyline.

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One up from fan fiction

They’re not Bernard Cornwell level and the heroes dialogue would make the Mighty Thor blush but I’ve read worse.

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Getting a bit emotionally heavy for an action book

I am enjoying the series but this book was a bit difficult due to follow as the main character spends half his time with huge doubts about everything he does or spends chapters grieving over lost loves or makes ridiculous decisions and offends people who bizarrely forgive him.

Just hope book three gets better.

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Great story telling!!

Clearly influenced by Bernard Cornwell, but that is no bad thing. I would say that the story telling is less predictable then BC's however and the first 2 books in the series (including this one) have been simply superb. Also the narration by Barnaby Edwards just puts the icing on the cake!

great

really enjoyed it, worth a listen if you like Bernard Cornwall you'll like this!!!! enjoy