Interesting Gimmick Ruined By Sexual Content

The main character Azaria, a 14 (15?) year old girl, is constantly subject to sexual situations that make her uncomfortable, as well as several situations with the older Lance being solved with her tits. Several times this book devolved into a thinly veiled exploration of the author's fetishes. Crime drama is a lie. This is an erotica.

Azaria having her memories is interesting, and her interactions with Lance that give Lance her Harvester powers are compelling, but all of this is overshadowed by the unnecessarily abundant sexual content.

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Stats for padding

I don't mind the stat reading in books until you read the same stats and achievements, flavor text included, every 30 minutes. Along with that the characters feel stilted and more like plot objects then people, there was no time spent on how Lance's changes affected them but the end result of all skipped mental changes still was in the plot.

The narrator wasn't the worst but she sounded like she was recording on a terrible mic, and with her lack of ability to do convincing male voices they tended to blend together.

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Great book

Love this book bought first three befour I made it to the part ware (spoilers) this is a must read/listen

very interesting

So as the title states, this is a rather interesting series to pick up. I don't think I have read any other dungeon core series that uses constructs (dolls) as the primary minion type.

Narration-wise, It could have been a bit better especially with male voices. However, since the MCs were both female it can be a mute point. Now off to listen to book 2 so I can find out what that goddess is up to.

love the performance story's alright

my only real comment is that I wish every time it went to the status screen it was a little faster