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  • An Unsuitable Heir

  • Sins of the Cities, Book 3
  • By: KJ Charles
  • Narrated by: Matthew Lloyd Davies
  • Length: 7 hrs and 28 mins
  • 4.5 out of 5 stars (157 ratings)

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An Unsuitable Heir

By: KJ Charles
Narrated by: Matthew Lloyd Davies
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Summary

A private detective finds passion, danger, and the love of a lifetime when he hunts down a lost earl in Victorian London.

On the trail of an aristocrat's secret son, enquiry agent Mark Braglewicz finds his quarry in a music hall, performing as a trapeze artist with his twin sister. Graceful, beautiful, elusive, and strong, Pen Starling is like nobody Mark's ever met - and everything he's ever wanted. But the long-haired acrobat has an earldom and a fortune to claim.

Pen doesn't want to live as any sort of man, least of all a nobleman. The thought of being wealthy, titled, and always in the public eye is horrifying. He likes his life now - his days on the trapeze, his nights with Mark. And he won't be pushed into taking a title that would destroy his soul.

But there's a killer stalking London's foggy streets, and more lives than just Pen's are at risk. Mark decides he must force the reluctant heir from music hall to manor house, to save Pen's neck. Betrayed by the one man he thought he could trust, Pen never wants to see his lover again. But when the killer comes after him, Pen must find a way to forgive - or he might not live long enough for Mark to make amends.

Don't miss any of the captivating Sins of the Cities novels:

  • An Unseen Attraction
  • An Unnatural Vice
  • An Unsuitable Heir

And look for the enticing Society of Gentlemen series by KJ Charles:

  • The Ruin of Gabriel Ashleigh
  • A Fashionable Indulgence
  • A Seditious Affair
  • A Gentleman's Position

©2017 K. J. Charles (P)2017 Audible, Inc.

Critic reviews

"I'll read anything KJ Charles writes!" ( New York Times best-selling author Kate Pearce)
"KJ Charles has long been one of my favorite authors." ( USA Today best-selling author Carole Mortimer)

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Loved it

Thank you so much for writing a book with a non-binary/ genderfluid main character. It means a lot.

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Repentance and Regret

The abundance of themes complicate this plot in an interesting and intriguing crime romp. Incidents and occurrances from history punctuate the tale with facts. INTERESTING

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One of my absolute fave reads ever

I already adored this book, having read it digitally. It has fantastic characters, amazing mystery, drama that’s juicy but balanced by the central characters loving and supporting each other.

I am obsessed with Pen’s gender rep and Mark’s attraction, both of which were so very relatable to me and which I have very rarely seen in media. I love their relationship and inside jokes, I love Pen’s relationship with Greta, and the writing is fantastic and fun and earthy and fascinating.

So now that I’m into audiobooks I was thrilled to find the audio performance completely worthy of the story. I’m so grateful to the narrator for doing this story justice and making it easy to get swept away. Would really recommend this one, but it’s best read in series order because of the central mystery!

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brilliant yeahhh absolutely fabulous book

thanks to all involved in this series of books.
I thoroughly enjoyed listening to them.
lots of steamy, love and great characters.
I would recommed them.

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Being a Lord is dangerous

Life of a Lord is not always good especially when someone is out to kill you and take title and the best way is out. Enjoy the fun.

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characters to fall for

great story line with good twists and easily to love characters. brilliant narration and accents too

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The least enjoyable of the trilogy

I did not like Mark nor Pen and was not really interested who the killer was. I missed several motivations to keep reading. Does the heir get his coronet? He doesn't even care himself. Finding long lost family? No-one wants to be related to these criminals. Does the estate run well and are the workers cared for? No mention of that. It also does not mention wealth and what one can do with it. And there is some unknown psychopath killing people for reasons only he himself knows, which is hard to put in a plot line other that dead bodies turning up.
What I liked was the non-binary protagonist, but as a cis-woman I can not judge if this is a convincing representation.
The narration was great.

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Loved it

This trilogy just kept getting better and better. I would never have guessed the murderer. The narrator is first class and I already dread getting a KJ Charles book read by anyone else.

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Magnificent finale

The first two books were excellent but this one beats them. We follow the twists and turns of the family succession as a murderer is on the loose. Pen & Greta Starling are trying to evade their fate the denizens of the Jack & Knave are doing their best to put things to rights all against the backdrop of Victorian London. Thrilling

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London in the round

If you read the novels of Wilkie Collins (or even Dickens), you'd be forgiven for thinking Victorian London was populated entirely by 'normal' (ie white, cis-het) people. KJ Charles bursts that illusion without fuss or fanfare in this series. It is one of many elements that holds a reader's attention.

In this third book, characters win out over plot. The whodunnit and accompanying machinations are entertaining but it's the people that grab you. To have two queer principal characters is marvellous. Maybe Victorian times lacked the vocabulary to describe queerness. It still existed though, with individuals having to navigate their needs and how to fit into wider society.

Reading both this series and The Society of Gentlemen make me want to explore this world more. Entertainment and education, romance, a little grit, and plenty of sexiness - what more could you want?

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  • Eugenia
  • 25-11-17

What a climax!

My FAVORITE of the series! What a range of characters we’ve seen in these books. The MCs in this one blew me away, especially since they appeared in a historical romance!

Pen is a gender fluid trapeze artist. Mark is a pansexual man of inquiry. Mark sees Pen and he’s mesmerized. Pen sees Mark and is dubious of his seemingly honest attraction to and acceptance of him. I LOVED these two together, delighted in how they navigated understanding each others’ sexuality and creating trust. Only to have it purposefully destroyed.

That’s right, stuff happens and it’s not all good. People get hurt. It’s not all perfect, love and roses forever (well, OK, until the HEA).

This is the finale of a mystery that began two books ago. I’m usually pretty adept at figuring out whodunit. But here, I didn’t have a clue. Not at all. Zero. This both delighted and frustrated me to no end. Well done there, K.J. Charles, well done!

Pen is the likely heir to an earldom. He doesn’t want it. At all. But people are dying because of him. What to do? Read it and find out.

And if you’re hankering for an audiobook, the performance for this one was incredible!

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  • Caroline Adaire
  • 11-03-19

Ick

Penn is unrelatable. I would wear men's clothes everyday to give my family a good future and I am a woman. This sissy crybaby whines about becoming an earl and not one person says anything to him about what an ungrateful brat he's being. Oh, as nd he's really freaking weird. He also seems to be on the super slow side, and not the innocent Forrest Gump way, but the uncomfortably stupid sort of way. I keep seeing Buffalo Bill from Silence of the Lambs.

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  • BR
  • 25-11-17

Series ends on a high note

The final installment of the Sins of the City gives interesting characters, a nice narration and resolution of the mystery in KJ Charles' inimitable style. There is instant attraction between trapeze artist Pen and private investigator Mark that shows how gender fluidity can be beautiful. Pen struggles with being misunderstood and opens up to Mark's compassionate understanding. However, an unwanted title forces Pen to play the gentleman and violence follows in his wake. The mystery begun in the first book has a satisfying conclusion. You also get to catch up with Clem, Rowley, Nathaniel and Justin from the first two books of the series which is fun. The whole series is narrated by Matthew Lloyd Davis who does a fine job in character voice and development. I am beyond thrilled KJ Charles is getting turned into audibles and hope more of her books get the attention they deserve.

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  • JR Maxwell
  • 21-12-20

*insert obligatory title here*

*insert obligatory 15 word review here even though I only want to rate the book*

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  • Cranky Reader
  • 09-06-20

Suitably entertaining romantic mystery


There’s an earl’s contested heir and a pile of trouble to keep the heir missing. Because who wouldn’t want to be a fabulously wealthy earl? Sensitively written to explain who’s who & what everyone’s motivations are for finding or silencing the heir, it’s a fine tale of misfits trying to just be themselves. Which means they all have learned to view the world a little sideways, and thus are more interesting characters than in an average story about earls.

Somewhat unexpected (to me) this conclusion to the trilogy was neatly written to overlap the previous two books’ timelines without rehashing more than a moment or two. We see Clem, Roly, Lazarus & Nathaniel while Mark does his best to figure out what is going on. And falls in love.

Steam: Med-Low Some details on page but not a lot of dwell time. Mostly concerns how to be comfortable in a body that doesn’t fit in, in one way or another.

Narration: Same solid narration as previous installments. Emotional moments done empathetically, easy to follow along. Good quality.

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  • bgrant
  • 21-08-23

Excellent ending for the Sins of the City trilogy!

After a rather disappointing second book in the series, I was impressed and satisfied with the exciting and appropriate ending found in An Unsuitable Heir. KJ Charles writes imaginative historical romance like no other. The characters created through the 3 books are endearing and believable and brought to life by excellent narration.

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  • Sasheenka
  • 27-02-23

Alright

The problem I have with this book is that I didn't really like either of the MCs. Also, I understand Pen's issues, but when people are dying left and right the fact that you can't wear earrings is kind of...well...someone should reconsider their priorities...

Anyways, the plot parts were written very well and it was even kind of scary and all the good stuff a book about gruesome murders and terrible families should be, but because I couldn't really connect with either of the main characters made it difficult to enjoy it for me.

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  • KennieL
  • 30-11-22

story was meh

my favourite was book 2. it felt like the ending was underwhelming. **spoilers** I didn't remember the murder. at all. he was nobody important. I liked the non-binary character. it feels like we don't see those in books. and mark was perfect. Proformance is perfect like always.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 17-11-22

very good conclusion

this turned out to be a really good series. the overall plot of the three books was an excellent mystery. I really enjoyed the unconventional characters. They were not typical of most period romance books. it was a refreshing change. My only complaint was sometimes it was hard to tell which character was speaking. The narrator didn't make enough distinction.

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  • Maya Ofek
  • 08-11-22

What a beautiful book and series.

This might be my favorite in this very lovely trilogy. Excellent narration on all three, and really enjoyable characters.

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